I went back to read the other pages and I loved it! The narration was creepy, but the overtone of humor was epic. And I loved your usage of screen tones. Great job on this one! You should do more in the future!
Amazing. You tell the relationship of a writer to his/her working so well: a story finally solidifies and then there is a pain to get it written, the soul suffering the demons of wanting perfection, the infantile doubts and the plagues of fearing rejection.
Good storytelling and love the way you move the "camera" around. Also, have you played around with Manga Studios at all? Only ask because I see that you're using some "printer dots" with the colors....Manga Studio has a pretty sweet collection of those if you want to try out some different styles.