I went back to read the other pages and I loved it! The narration was creepy, but the overtone of humor was epic. And I loved your usage of screen tones. Great job on this one! You should do more in the future!
Amazing. You tell the relationship of a writer to his/her working so well: a story finally solidifies and then there is a pain to get it written, the soul suffering the demons of wanting perfection, the infantile doubts and the plagues of fearing rejection.